My Civil Servant Life Reborn in the Strange World

It's good to read

5 star

Read a few chapters and quickly realized its another stupid op but braindead mc, with quips or random side characters that try to add genius or comedic scenes.

At start it was good but later at chapter 15 it started getting boring but i try to stick around until chapter 54 and i cant take it anymore. The story was empty

Hi, I'm Ivern, a young man who was transmigrated into a reviewer's body after I died in my past life as a low budget escort. I am now doing my best to journey my way into the degeneracy contained into this sit-

Greetings, I'm Mivern! I'm Ivern's cousin and I embarked in an adventure to save a princess and steal riches for the glory of the proletariat and the everl-

And I'm Lisvern! I'm a princess but also an assassin and Mivern's third grand uncle who travels in the land of the Great Goddess Marika The Eternal, but in Saudi Arabia, somehow! I am gonna make tentacles monsters and shït! Also my face is a cow's!

You got it? It's all like this. Simply too much. Too many characters that suffocate each others, vying for precious screentime and lacking development. To many parallel plotlines and events that are not that difficult to follow, but do break the attention and interest you have for a certain plot line among the many. You can do multiple POV narration in Game of Thrones. Not in a manga that won't go on for 1000 chapters, and not with this fast pacing. 

It's a pity because I otherwise appreciate both the writing, which is linear but nice, and the art, which is actually very smooth. Characterization feels a bit too simplicistic for now, but not unlikeable, and the plot, given the issue I mentioned, does seem intriguing. I like the intricate adventure and interconnect events it recounts. When I can be arsed to follow it. Again, too much meat on the fire. 

At the moment, I find it stretched too thin. I hope it will improve in the future, because I think it has great technical basics. It just needs to get its sh** together and stop jumping around like a pangolin who snorted pure adderal. 8+ on the Ivern Scale™️, for now. I'm reserving judgement in case it degenerates into a dumpster fire.

WHAT!!! WHY!!! I REALLY LIKE THIS ALOT AND READ IT SEVERAL TIMES!!! STILL NEVER TIRED OF READING IT!! PLEAE MOLRE !!!